This looks pretty good but I have to question your main character using a phone. I know that that will make it seem like he's a normal living person but knowing that he's actually already dead, I just question how that will look. Let's talk about that part and see what we can come up with. I would suggest that one of you be the main character instead of Raine. It has nothing to do with Raine or anything, but he's doing his own project and I think it would be hard on him to help both your team and do his own project. One of you could easily be that main character. Think about changing your main character to one of you instead. 4 points.
Write something about yourself. No need to be fancy, just an overview.