This looks better from your first draft but your b-roll is still sort of all over the place. You do have a few sequences in there but for the most part, your b-roll is simply just random shots. I think that's where you need the most work in this video. Your audio is great and consistent....your interviews are lit and shot well, and some of your b-roll using the steadicam is outstanding. But you need to keep in mind that when you are shooting b-roll, they need to be in sequences. Try not to just film just to film, knowing that you need b-roll shots. Think like an editor and put together sequences that help tell your story. Despite that, it's still one of the better stories of the class but I know that you can do better. Let's work on that for the next round. I'd give this an A grade....not the A+ that I'm used to seeing from you but still a very good effort.
Write something about yourself. No need to be fancy, just an overview.